Arjuna raced through the forest, dodging branches and giant plants.
He held up his bow and an arrow sliced the air, hitting the middle of his
target. A log came crashing towards him and Arjuna narrowly side stepped to avoid it. He continued on his training path through difficult terrain with
seemingly impossible targets for any marksman. He completed this course with
ease regardless of the level of difficulty. His weapons trainer Drona watched
in awe as he completed a course no other student had before. He
knew his student would be great.
Drona walked over to Arjuna with a blank look on his face. “No
other student has ever shown more promise.” Arjuna thanked the Guru and went on
with his training late into the night.
One month later, Arjuna had just finished his training for the day.
He stayed late to clean his weapons while Drona left to go bathe in the river.
Arjuna walked home for the evening when he crossed a bridge over the
river. Arjuna heard a loud cry for help that he could not easily recognize.
With bow in hand, he bolted towards the voice he heard down the river. As he
passed a bend in the river, he caught sight of a massive crocodile with his
jaws around a man. It appeared as though the man was holding the beast’s jaws
open just enough to keep from being torn to shreds. Arjuna was a great distance
away when he heard his name. The voice sounded familiar.
“Arjuna!” the man shouted. “Do not come any closer for I fear you
too will become devoured by this great monster.”
Arjuna then realized it was Drona who was trapped in the jaws of
this beast. He replied, “I will not come any closer but I will slay him from
here.”
While the crocodile was thrashing around, Arjuna had to be very
careful not to hit Drona with his arrow by mistake. There was very little room
for error. He recalled his training where he was hitting difficult targets
while dodging obstacles. This could not be any different from his training. He
drew his arrow and visualized his target. In between his breaths at his natural
pause, he let loose his first arrow. He hit his mark and severed the
crocodile’s tail completely. Drona watched it float down the river in
excitement but the crocodile howled in agony. Arjuna quickly pulled four more
arrows from his quiver and fired them all in unison. Each arrow struck the
reptile on each of its limbs, pinning the creature to the bank of the river.
However, he would not release Drona from within his jaws.
Drona called out to Arjuna, “Finish him quickly for my
strength is dwindling.”
Arjuna fired one last arrow that pierced the neck of the once
mighty crocodile. The jaws of the beast finally relaxed and Drona fell onto the sandy beach. The guru ripped the fatal arrow from the flesh of the slain creature. Drona crawled off the shore and gave Arjuna the last arrow
that defeated the predator. Arjuna kept the arrow so he would never forget the day
he defeated the great river beast.

Author’s note-
I wanted to focus more on detail and
action than dialogue. There is a lot of opportunity for detailed action
in this story. I liked having the opportunity to make the story my own through
detail and action. I made up the introduction to show instead of tell how great
Arjuna was. I got a lot of my inspiration from the show Arrow. It
is a show based on a DC comic book character the Green Arrow. The scene in the
introduction is similar to a scene in the show. I also had in mind scenes from
Ninja Assassin when Drona was telling Arjuna that no one has ever shown more
promise. I was imagining the ninja master saying that to his pupil just like
the movie.
I chose to write about
Arjuna and this story because I love stories with archery and action. It was
really neat that Arjuna actually saved his master in the story. I would think
it would be the other way around.I thought I could incorporate both into my
story. I tried to stick to the story but it was fairly easy due to the lack of
detail in the original version. This is definitely one of my favorite stories
yet and I had a lot of fun writing it.
Bibliography- “Enter the Players” Narayan, R.K. (1978) the
Mahabharata. 13